What the video should have been, as per my limitless autism:
-Interviews with Pippa's friends, genmates, without being lead to the documenter's conclusion. Let them cook, on their own, in their own words.
-Cut out everything that doesn't have to do with those interviews, including but not limited to: skin-posting, mod-posting, talking about how much you know about Pippa/her history, "holding her accountable" or whatever that guilt-trip was at the end
-Keep the running time to around 10 - 15 minutes at the absolute maximum, ideally it should be around 5 - 7 minutes, because it *will* play on Pippa's stream, and she *will* keep pausing throughout to react
-Do not put the "winding down/ending" segment in the middle of the documentary, if at all. A better ending would have been the interviewee's final thoughts/comments, and a brief (few second) flourish of the title card before the zinger of "haha kirsche dropped a hard-R-but-not-really", I feel like there were better options for that as well
-Do not interject your own opinions of Pippa's content, what you find objectionable, do that on your own time and not for a Pippa-related celebratory video
-If something comes to mind where you think "wouldn't it be cool if-", immediately discard that thought. Focus on a single strength, the interviews, and the content will be all the better for it instead of being a mismatched stitching together of various ideas.
Source: personal experience in this type of content creation, compounded with educational experience, generalized heavily because if I do the heavy lifting, I expect to be paid for it.