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It is done.
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I had this cover idea while eating today, do you think it's worth finalizing? Gonna take a while (an extra day, probably, as I'm tired and going to bed).
I need to work on the shadows, add lens blur for the focus, bring the lighting tone to yellow as sunlight, fix the dish cloth (you can see the purple on the left) and texturize the text for the cloth as embroidery.
E: I'm a fucking retard and forgot to edit some names, one minute.
E2: Fixed the links.
E3: Fixed the links again because of a typo in the credits and lack of texture on the page...
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I had this cover idea while eating today, do you think it's worth finalizing? Gonna take a while (an extra day, probably, as I'm tired and going to bed).
I need to work on the shadows, add lens blur for the focus, bring the lighting tone to yellow as sunlight, fix the dish cloth (you can see the purple on the left) and texturize the text for the cloth as embroidery.
E: I'm a fucking retard and forgot to edit some names, one minute.
E2: Fixed the links.
E3: Fixed the links again because of a typo in the credits and lack of texture on the page...
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It's up to you, and you have the time. Given what happened last stream, I don't think she would go over this on her sat stream if she streams at all. There's the Jim overlap, too, so it's best for most if this happens next week.It is done.
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I had this cover idea while eating today, do you think it's worth finalizing? Gonna take a while (an extra day, probably, as I'm tired and going to bed).
I need to work on the shadows, add lens blur for the focus, bring the lighting tone to yellow as sunlight, fix the dish cloth (you can see the purple on the left) and texturize the text for the cloth as embroidery.
E: I'm a fucking retard and forgot to edit some names, one minute.
Also, I found a grammar error with the Miso recipe. Change it to this Bake tell the salmon is done cooking, which will be about 20-30 minutes.
It's late here as well, so I will make sure to go over it again in the morning.
I like this cover a lot better, yeah. Paladin's right about waiting a bit, so that should give a bit of time to perfect it before sending the PDF to the yabbit.It is done.
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I had this cover idea while eating today, do you think it's worth finalizing? Gonna take a while (an extra day, probably, as I'm tired and going to bed).
I need to work on the shadows, add lens blur for the focus, bring the lighting tone to yellow as sunlight, fix the dish cloth (you can see the purple on the left) and texturize the text for the cloth as embroidery.
E: I'm a fucking retard and forgot to edit some names, one minute.
E2: Fixed the links.
E3: Fixed the links again because of a typo in the credits and lack of texture on the page...
They say "perfection is the enemy of progress" but I really like the cover you're cooking up. If you have the time and energy in you to do it without getting too
or gassed out I say go for it.In the meantime, our pal Paladin and I (plus anyone else that wants to help except pipkun) will give it a thorough proofreading later today and will post any corrections we find here.
Also, can someone please feed that damn dog??
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I relinked the media and it undid the masking I'm gonna kill myself. I'll fix this tomorrow and finish the cover/back cover.
looks good brother, the project is in your capable hands. dont let the good idea fairies start mucking around. you do what you want manIt is done.
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But
I had this cover idea while eating today, do you think it's worth finalizing? Gonna take a while (an extra day, probably, as I'm tired and going to bed).
I need to work on the shadows, add lens blur for the focus, bring the lighting tone to yellow as sunlight, fix the dish cloth (you can see the purple on the left) and texturize the text for the cloth as embroidery.
E: I'm a fucking retard and forgot to edit some names, one minute.
E2: Fixed the links.
E3: Fixed the links again because of a typo in the credits and lack of texture on the page...
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Looks very good, has a lot of SOVL and is kino.
My favorite part is still the hot water treatise, it's so fucking good.
My favorite part is still the hot water treatise, it's so fucking good.
I think we already established I would just tweet it at her using her community tags and such once it's finished and on an e-reader, and from that point it would be up to her whether she mentions or goes over it on a stream rather than us attempting to actively strongarm a stream derail segment on it well-passed the actual debut anniversary date.
Edits
For GRUMPY GRANDPA’S NORTHERN COMFORT
part 1 all is repeated twice
For PANKO’S POCKET PASTA
part one change the text to
Pour 4-5 quarts of water into the pot and start to boil.
Minutes is mispled in part 8
Possible Edits:
For the udon soup replace "Peel the shrimp and set aside the shells from it. With
"Run the shrimp under hot water, then peel the shrimp and set aside the shells from it"
I made the overcite of trusting the reader to have basic knowledge of shrimp preparation.
JACK’S CRUSTY BAKED CHICKEN
Change "Pound the chicken breasts ‘till 1/2 in thickness" to "Under saran-wrap, pound the chicken breasts ‘till 1/2 in thickness."
I also don't trust that Pippa knows how to pound chicken without spraying raw chicken juice everywhere.
These were the only things that jumped out to me on a second reading.
For GRUMPY GRANDPA’S NORTHERN COMFORT
part 1 all is repeated twice
For PANKO’S POCKET PASTA
part one change the text to
Pour 4-5 quarts of water into the pot and start to boil.
Minutes is mispled in part 8
Possible Edits:
For the udon soup replace "Peel the shrimp and set aside the shells from it. With
"Run the shrimp under hot water, then peel the shrimp and set aside the shells from it"
I made the overcite of trusting the reader to have basic knowledge of shrimp preparation.
JACK’S CRUSTY BAKED CHICKEN
Change "Pound the chicken breasts ‘till 1/2 in thickness" to "Under saran-wrap, pound the chicken breasts ‘till 1/2 in thickness."
I also don't trust that Pippa knows how to pound chicken without spraying raw chicken juice everywhere.
These were the only things that jumped out to me on a second reading.
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I absolutely love this.
Wow you guys did great, I'm even tempted to maybe try some of these myself.
I've noticed some typos tho
P.9 "bef ore" in the last paragraph
P.10 "means over several days" should be meals I think
E: Quite a few typos in panko's pocket pizza directions section: oil shimmer, pot of is boiling,
I've noticed some typos tho
P.9 "bef ore" in the last paragraph
P.10 "means over several days" should be meals I think
E: Quite a few typos in panko's pocket pizza directions section: oil shimmer, pot of is boiling,
Is this Good enough? I think the sunrays add a bit of warmth to the image, I tried to mask it with the shadows of the bowls. The stitched together with a rugged cloth for a more familiar take.
Gonna work on the back cover and the fixes you posted.
Gonna work on the back cover and the fixes you posted.
Sorry for the delay, I had guests by the weekend, could only read a bit of the forum and some replies.
Can you be more specific on Northern Comfort? What is doubled?
Doing spellchecking through ID, if you have a synonym for "doneness" I'm all ears.
You can ask an AI for alternatives if you don't wanna bother using your search engine, just another option.
Sir we only work with homegrown, organic vernaculars here. I will respect the author and leave it there.
I think this is the final version (I unfucked the spreads so I only exported one file): https://files.catbox.moe/6hnguf.pdf
Why the fuck are you arguing with fucking Jackie.
arguing with this specimen feels like asking a homeless if hes broke
I don't know every poster, man.
@thhrang did you consider sending it to her tomorrow? Holiday and all.
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