"If your future girlfriend is going to swallow two burgers in front of you, never tell her that she's eating too much, pet her on the head, tell her you love her and offer her fries"Auri Lunami
C-. You get the point across fine. The subtext is abysmal, however. I've previously warned of using qualifiers and adverbs in your creative writing. The sentence, "Pippa is perfection" is far better; it's alliterative which ads a nice poetic structure to the one sentence narrative. More importantly, the removal of "female" removes your grotesque subtext. It's a fixation, we know Pippa is a woman. It makes the reader question why you would include it. We know it's because you're a man, her being the opposite sex, and your arousal at that perfection is the subtext. It contorts the meaning from a hyperbolic perfection really meaning "I think Pippa is great and she's in no danger of living" into: "Man I love that Pippa has a pussy, I will emphasize this because I want to fuck her. That possibility of a sexual encounter is what drives me to continue my praise for her." Seek help.
We have given you multiple chances to drop your disgusting behaviour. From now on you are on a three-strike system, and this was your first. Next time you make a creepy post about Pippa or engage in another retarded and unfunny bit, it will be a month.
I have tolerated this for far too long, and ignored far too many reports. I am exercising a zero-tolerance policy towards him (and anyone potentially like him) going forwards.
I just want to know everything of her meats as well as her mind. You do know you can converse while you measure each beautifully precious finger and feel the contour of every knuckle, seeing the glorious glisten of her nails and the loving shape of the pale satin palm.
This was one of the main offending messages from last night. Do not post like this.
Note: Whether or not it's a 'bit' does not matter. Null has a general no-tolerance policy for obsessive gimmickposters on Kiwi Farms for a reason, and we are adopting it.
I have tolerated this for far too long, and ignored far too many reports. I am exercising a zero-tolerance policy towards him (and anyone potentially like him) going forwards.
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